My guest blogger today never ceases to amuse AND inform me with her blogposts. I started following her when I was in the depths of my querying despair, because her blog-name said it all: “Creepy Query Girl” (aren’t we all, at some point or another!). You can find her over at http://creepyquerygirl.blogspot.com/. Her real name is Katie Mills, and here’s how she describes herself:
I used to be a normal married mother of three. Then I finished my first book and slowly transformed into the creepy query girl. Now in my spare time I’m tracking literary agents’ every move. On the internet. Not like, outside their windows with binoculars…yet.
Thank you, Katie!
****Have you ever made any major query mistakes? I know I have! Please share some of your query wisdom or share your questions with the Creepy Query Girl!****
Heather Day Gilbert says
Thanks so much for blogging today, Katie! And my first query was just something I threw together–a regular fiasco. Thankfully, I had a friend read over it and give me some massive editing tips. We polished it up till it hooked you right in. Only problem was, my book was too short and it was a little edgy for Christian fiction. But I did (finally!) get some requests!
TC Avey says
Thanks Katie.My query is evolving. Looking back, I can see it has transformed (though only time will tell what it has finally morphed into). I just started re-sending it and am hoping/praying I will finally get something other than the standard "this isn't a good fit for us" rejection letter.
Creepy Query Girl says
Thanks Heather! Querying definitely has its ups and downs- even with a great query. All we can do is keep trying and keep sending things out! Congrats on your requests!
Heather Day Gilbert says
It was actually great practice for the next query (for my next book!), which finally (after other requests) found its way into the hands of my most awesome agent! Every query is a step toward figuring out what works best, like you say, Katie!
Amy L. Sonnichsen says
Great post, Katie! And I love the new blog look, Heather. Very professional. I may need your help one of these days to revamp mine. Oi. Query mistakes … hmmm … I'm pretty sure my first two query letters were atrocious, but I think it's especially hard to write a query when the plot of your book is suspect (which was my big problem with the first two books). Queries really do help you decide whether you have something Awesome or something Flawed. This was a lesson I learned the hard way!
Andy Scheer says
If your query is to an agent, make sure you say your proposal is ready (and that your book is complete.
Heather Day Gilbert says
Thank you, Amy! That gives me an idea for a guest blogpost about setting up cool blogs. And if plot's lacking, it's sad to see it once you're sitting down to write that query, for sure.And yes, it's great to have a proposal ready to go if it's requested (proposals need a blogpost all their own!). Also important to get that word count in there and say it's complete. Thanks for the input, Andy!
Sarah Pearson says
Excellent, informative post. How would you mention your blog in the query, (assuming you don't have anything else to sandwich it in between that an agent would be interested in)?
Heather Day Gilbert says
Sarah, that's a good question! I think you can't go wrong putting it under your name (along w/twitter info, etc), unless it's incredibly successful, garnering a notable number of hits/comments/followers, in which case, definitely mention that in the letter. I know when I first started a blog and mentioned it in one of my queries, a top agent was happy to let me know that wasn't even relevant info for a wannabe debut author.BUT times have changed since then, and I would also think that any online presence info you could include would be helpful. But that might be more for the proposal, as opposed to the query.Any recent query-ers have any info on protocol for blog info in the letter?
Creepy Query Girl says
Sarah- I usually stick it in there at the end with the 'In addition to novels, I also write articles about publishing, the craft of writing, and the querying process which are featured on my blog- Creepy Query Girl.'
Heather Day Gilbert says
Yes, what Creepy Query Girl said! That sounds good! It's true, you put so much effort into a blog, you should be able to mention it.